This example of the sub-editors’ once proud craft, from Wales Online, won’t be making it into the reckoning for Press Gazette’s relaunched headline of the month competition.
If you think you can do better – why not enter headline of the month?
The winning entry each month, and the person who nominates them, will receive a bottle of Jura single malt whisky – and they will also enter into the running to win an exclusive weekend away on the Isle of Jura.
The deadline for entries to this month’s competition is 17 August.
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